The recent novel by Tao Lin, Richard Yates, has a perfect ending: an index.
alert 117, 184
concerned 84, 99, 187
and so on. The entry for facial expressions might be the best poem of 2010.
The prose in Richard Yates
is so tightly coupled with the details of what (little) happens that is
it is conceivable that one could, with an Excel spreadsheet with the
right VLOOKUP functions, reverse engineer the novel from the index.
details the GChat, text message, and real life interchanges between a
twenty-six-year old Manhattan writer named Haley Joel Osment and his
sixteen-year-old girlfriend named Dakota Fanning. A nice touch here is
that Mr. Lin makes no attempt to differentiate between these modes of
communication through any stylistic convention (as does Gary Shteyngart
in the other Facebook (and then some) novel of the summer Super Sad True Love Story) because between these two, there isn't any. Sentences roll out factory fresh like status updates. Pronouns are rare in Richard Yates.
They are referred to as "Haley Joel Osment" and "Dakota Fanning,"
full-named like Facebook accounts, a style I will mimic in the next two
paragraphs to give you a taste.
would not be far off describing the book and the people in it as cold,
but that might be misleading once one considers the climate. The world
of young people is cold. Haley Joel Osment and Dakota Fanning look on
the world often with dead eyes, hiding away a hormonal fire raging
therein. Dakota Fanning is perfectly sixteen: mildly ignored by a single
mom who is torn between the pros and cons of this bad idea
relationship. Dakota Fanning cuts herself. Dakota Fanning obsesses about
her weight. Dakota Fanning has half-cooked idealizations about her
relationship with Haley Joel Osment.
Joel Osment is also perfectly twenty-six. Haley Joel Osment lives in a
sparsely furnished apartment and has a cake job he treats with limp
derision. Haley Joel Osment is basically carried on the shoulders of
the world like all twenty-six year-old men are and has gotten bored with
the view up there. Haley Joel Osment vents his repressed frustrations
on his girlfriend Dakota Fanning in incrementally cruel ways. It is
telling that Haley Joel Osment is the narrator, because it precisely how
Haley Joel Osment and all twenty-six-year-olds like Haley Joel Osment
see the world: as vaguely irksome narratives revolving around Haley Joel
how grating that full name bullshit is? After a while, though, it
becomes a little soothing, like the purr of an aquarium motor. So much
so that when emotions eventually do rise to the surface and the
protective bubble bursts a little, it is almost disappointing. One
almost wants the circuit of youth to be closed, cycling through each
other at dizzying speed, but in fact, like the cell phones on which they live their lives, reception is spotty and access is wide open. There is sex
in Richard Yates, but is some of the least sexiest sex in the whole of
teen sex writing, because actual teen sex is kinda boring, at least for the
ones having it. It's the lead-up and fall-out tat are exciting. The act itself is a drive more than a trip.
Lin is smart to make being a voyeur boring as well. It allows you to co-opt Haley Joel Osment and Dakota Fanning's shallow darkness for a while. When they do get to
mischief, like when they shoplift clothes to sell on eBay, my reaction
was, hmm, not a bad idea. I mean, if you are going to shoplift
Like all novels of youth, those traipsing through Richard Yates (named for the Revolutionary Road
author whose books Haley Joel Osment steals from Barnes & Noble) is
idealized. No one is Holden Caulfield, no one is Huckleberry Finn and
no one is Haley Joel Osment nor are they Dakota Fanning. The two stand
in for a weird kind of hope that the next generation will form the right
reptilian traits needed to thrive in the world they will inherit. They
are the product of neglect, marketing, the wind, themselves, ourselves,
nothing. As a era-defining poet said when I was Dakota Fanning's age,
they are the sons and heirs of nothing in particular. And yet, they find
things on which to spend this inheritance, like we all do. In a way,
I'd hate to watch these two grow out of it, despite the implanted
longing to tell them to do so. You can say the Internet destroyed the
youth but you created it, and are probably using it to tell someone your
astute finding, and the youth isn't listening anyway. Would you?
So is Richard Yates
a good book? Yes, but it doesn't matter. Why? Because it doesn't
matter. One might be inclined to call it a better meta-novel than it is a
novel, but it really isn't a meta-novel. It is a tale of low-watt lives
on a low-sling trajectory told with laser precision. Whether it is a
tome for the ages, a milestone marker on our road to enlightenment is
probably a better question for whatever Illuminati manage the Internet.
They will maybe one day rebuild humanity as a manifestation of
timestamped Facebook updates and blog posts, something that will become
at once more false and more true to what we were really like, because
that is what literature of any stripe or quality does. When that happens, then we'll know what makes it.
Tao Lin's irritatingly named blog: http://heheheheheheheeheheheehehe.com/